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posted September 8th, 2009, 12:18 pm


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September 8th, 2009, 12:35 pm

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Looking kind of cool so far :D Like the outfits and the bgs. ^^

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September 8th, 2009, 1:57 pm

Sai

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Nice use of backgrounds, visual effects, and color so far. Clean execution of lettering and sound effects. The character design of the...girl, I presume, is pretty neat, too. XD

This is a matter of opinion, but the anime style is kinda detracting from the nice scenery and color--doesn't quite fit the seriousness of the situation. More constructively, you have anatomy kinks here and there, mostly when it comes to the shoulders and the head. Although it's not an anime reference, google up Andrew Loomis. I personally find his instructional books on drawing heads a wonderful wealth of information.

Anyway, good work so far, and keep it up. <:

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September 8th, 2009, 2:09 pm

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Personally, I like it. I think the anime style is just fine.

Are you planning on doing the whole series in colour? Because so far, the colouring in particular is very impressive.

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September 8th, 2009, 2:38 pm

Wavechan

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@kelinor: Thanks :D

@Sai: thanks for the suggestions ^^ I kind of like putting contrasts up against another -- anime celshade vs realistic scenery, cute against serious.

@kotor: Thanks very much :D Yes, the whole comic will be in color :)!

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September 8th, 2009, 5:52 pm

Oak Administrator

Wow.

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Yeah, the coloring is great. Also I'm severely impressed by the backgrounds. Keep it up.

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September 8th, 2009, 6:27 pm

Theowl

woo

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I'm not really a fan of anime, but the backgrounds and coloring are amazing in this.
Keeeep it up. (:

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view Shiuze's profile

September 8th, 2009, 9:52 pm

Shiuze

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Yay! Glad you put it up! ^_^

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view whirlwyndblue's profile

September 9th, 2009, 12:37 am

whirlwyndblue

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Sweet coloring. Hope to see more of this soon =)

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September 9th, 2009, 1:03 pm

H0lyhandgrenade

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Your backgrounds truly look incredible XD

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September 12th, 2009, 12:20 am

:E (Guest)

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cool :E!

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April 26th, 2017, 10:12 am

Ian Evans

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R E B E L S C U M

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